TOA
PAYOH VETS
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Date:
20 September, 2011
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A huge urinary stone in a female Golden Retriever
Dr
Sing Kong Yuen, BVMS (Glasgow), MRCVS
20 September, 2011 |
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Be Kind To Pets
Veterinary Education
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E-mail message from a magazine
Dear Dr Sing,
Good day! This is Michelle from the CozyCot Editorial team.
We are working on a pet story to be published in our print magazine's
inaugural issue in April, and I'm hoping that with your expertise and
experience, you can recommend one pet product (this can be anything
and everything from pet food, to pet cages to pet toys) and tell us
what's so good about it in about 50 words. It would also be great if
you could accompany the text with image(s) of the product and
yourself.
As we are running on a tight deadline, I would be extremely grateful
if you could get back to me as soon as possible. Many thanks!
Best Regards,
http://www.cozycot.com/
An inaugural issue of a magazine asked me to write
50 words to recommend a pet product and suggested an image of me and
the product. The images will not be of educational interest to
readers. However, an X-ray of a bladder stone will have greater
interest to readers (I presume).
I
used Microsoft Word, "Tools" - Word Count and got the
number of words as 50. Then I clicked "Spelling and Grammar.
The advice was to revise the following long fragment:
I recommend Hill's® Prescription Diet® s/d® Canine pet food to
dissolve struvite bladder stones in dogs that have difficulty in
peeing.
Since I have a limit of 50 words, I did not revise the fragment and
copied the paragraph onto the e-mail, attach the X-ray picture and
sent my e-mail on Feb 10, 2011. The 50 words are as follows:
I recommend Hill's® Prescription Diet® s/d® Canine pet food to
dissolve struvite bladder stones in dogs that have difficulty in
peeing. Veterinary tests are required. However, large bladder stones
(X-ray) require surgical removal so that your dog does not suffer
painful urination of smelly bloody urine daily for several months.
The 50 words' limit forces me to be concise and yet be able to educate
pet owners.
Advice to youths.
A person must write daily to be able to write better just as
exercising the muscles make one better built. There is no other way to
improve one's writing.
P.S
The Golden Retriever was operated by Dr Vanessa Lin at Toa Payoh
Vets and lives happily without smelly urine nowadays. |
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